My Description of Giraffes
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The Giraffes in the video are very tall with a long neck and long legs. They are white and have brown spots all over their bodies that come in different shapes. They have two ears and hair-covered horns. They also have purple tongues and look very happy. I can hear their footsteps on the tiled floor when they walk through the hallway. They are brown hair which goes from the top of their head down their neck in a line.
Some giraffes look very cute and some look very scary because of how their face looks when they walk. Their faces, neck and legs are very skinny but the rest of their bodies are very big. In the video they enjoy diving into the pool, I hear a splash of water when they dive into it.
When they run, they swing with the giraffe hanging from the roof and they curl into a ball before they dive into the pool and again they go to dive into the pool again with another giraffe hanging from the ceiling in a higher part of the roof.
The giraffes look very good at diving into the pool, they can do flips and other tricks. They look really cool and are having so much fun too. They look very happy when they are together.
Hi Marcus, I loved your writing about giraffes. It was very descriptive and just by reading it I could imagine the giraffes and what they looked like and what they were doing. Great work, I enjoyed it immensely!
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